I don’t know what it is
I can only feel it
feel it on my finger tips
and then straight to my head.
I want to talk with you endlessly
and at the same moment I wish you were not here.
I want to smile and get lost in those bottomless eyes of yours
and at the same time I don’t even look at you.
It’s not that I hate you now
It’s not that I don’t love to talk with you
It’s just that I want you to…
to smile as you always did,
those ravishing lips you have
I want to see them go wider again
I want to hear the sweetest voice
to say anything and play with me
oh! the way I love you
even you cannot take it away from me,
as a writers love you are
you will live this world forever
till the end…till eternity…..
I definitely feel the juxtaposition of emotion here. It’s quite intriguing how us humans can feel such parallel emotions at the same time.
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thanks…and it is intriguing indeed!!
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I love how you have described the conflicting emotions!
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Thank you…means a lot 🙂
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I didn’t expect to be exposed to so many emotions when I saw gin-chan picking his nose. Wonderful post.
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heh…you r a fellow otaku huh!
well you know how he gets all witty sometime 😀
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This is Beautiful! The way you have put emotions together, simply awesome. 👌
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Thanks…it means a lot 🙂
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You have the soul of a poet with a wonderful romantic streak that runs deep….beautiful…thanks for sharing 🙂
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‘soul of a poet’ i always wanted to hear that 😀
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Firstly awww….next, I love the emotional contradiction. I would love to visit for more of this!
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Well thank you 🙂
and read this one too it’s also good and similar to your taste i guess 😀
https://unravel159.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/again/
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I love the images you use to bring out the power of emotions .
Great job !!
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thank you..I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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It’s my pleasure 🙂
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You have captured real life in this poem, nothing is easy. Even the simplest things like love, life is unsure and therefore we feel different emotions. As humans we cannot only feel one thing, because of this we have so many. So many emotions that site together at once, regardless we feel them all and then not at all.
beautiful poem!
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thank you.. and it’s all actually real i felt everything that’s in the poem. i can only write what i truly feel you know(it’s kind of a curse too) but when i write i put my all to it.
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I am exactly the same, there is no point writing about things you don’t know or feel! this piece was beautifully written! keep blogging and I will keep a look out for your new poems!
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yeah and i will be waiting for another of that small commenting battle…
and check out the other two poems too if you already didn’t.
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❤ amazing work!
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thanks a lot!! 🙂
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Its lovely, especially the last five lines.
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put a lot of effort on them… thanks 🙂
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I know what it is – you have a talent in poetry.
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Sorry for the very late reply man but it means a lot seriously 😊
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