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That girl

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shabby she looks

untidy she is

the most beautiful

the most charming

gives my pulse a stop

fairy of that delectable night she is..

her thoughts are ravishing

her heart is even more

brighter than sun

colder than the night

epitome of a soothing moonlight she is..

she makes me feel better

she promises to be forever

a little crazy

a lot sweeter

my friend i call her

but my life she is…

49 thoughts on “That girl”

  1. INFINITE PASSION July 9, 2017 — 9:53 am

    Awww 🙂
    This is so beautifully written. well done !!

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      blaNk July 9, 2017 — 10:52 am

      I’m glad you like it 😊

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  2. Soumya July 9, 2017 — 10:22 am

    beautiful as always😀

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  4. This is Loit! July 9, 2017 — 2:28 pm

    Hey, I feel the same way about those in my life that I care so much about as well. Wonderful how other people’s words like yours can put a name to what so many other are unaware they are feeling. Thank you.

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      blaNk July 9, 2017 — 2:44 pm

      this means a lot..like really. thanks a lot 🙂

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  5. Bookricci July 9, 2017 — 2:45 pm

    So beautiful ❤ I love it

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  7. francesssxx July 10, 2017 — 2:16 pm

    Follow for follow please☝🙌

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      blaNk July 10, 2017 — 2:17 pm

      umm.. i’m checking your blog and i will follow it if i like it!!

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      blaNk July 10, 2017 — 2:23 pm

      i did follow your blog… bc i liked it and see potential 😀

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  8. eveemilie July 10, 2017 — 4:09 pm

    This is so beautiful! I love the line “her thoughts are ravishing” because to me the word ravishing is typically used to describe someone’s body or attractiveness. I love that here it is used to describe thoughts and one’s mind! Intelligence is sexy!

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      blaNk July 10, 2017 — 4:56 pm

      Thanks a lot for the lovely comment and for noticing… I mean that’s what poetry is about right, playing with words 😁

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  9. A July 11, 2017 — 3:46 am

    💯💯💓💓

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  10. Sobhalisha Panda July 11, 2017 — 3:20 pm

    Your writing is so amazing,,I have a lot to learn from you 😊

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      blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:06 pm

      Ah.. that’s so sweet of you😄
      and read Paulo Coelho, from him you’ll really learn

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      1. Sobhalisha Panda July 11, 2017 — 4:11 pm

        I love his writing,,I have read The Alchemist, Brida, 11 minutes and many more 😊

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:14 pm

        Alchemist is my fav… read Veronica decides to die if you haven’t already😁

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      3. Sobhalisha Panda July 11, 2017 — 4:17 pm

        I will definitely read it 😊,,thanks for suggesting

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:20 pm

        Yeah try to feel it.. don’t read it in a go save it so you can live the parts like daily. I actually took a month or so to finish it😋

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      5. Sobhalisha Panda July 11, 2017 — 4:22 pm

        Sure,,, I will,, well the 2nd Chapter of Shakti and her secret will be out tomorrow,,check it out and let me know whether I have improved a bit or not 😅

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:24 pm

        Yes absolutely… I so wanna know what that scary incident was🤗

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      7. Sobhalisha Panda July 11, 2017 — 4:30 pm

        It will take 2-3 chapters to explain that incident,,you need to have some patience 😜

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:40 pm

        I will just have to wait then 😊

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:27 pm

        Hey fyi i can’t reach your blog clicking your name. The address you put on account settings must be wrong change it and for now could you please send me a link to your blog

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      11. Sobhalisha Panda July 11, 2017 — 4:38 pm

        Now click on my name,,are you still facing the problem?

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:42 pm

        Yes.. go to your profile then account settings and correct the web address

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      13. Sobhalisha Panda July 11, 2017 — 4:43 pm

        I have already done that

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:47 pm

        Is it the same as the link you sent me?

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        blaNk July 11, 2017 — 4:50 pm

        Good news then… It’s working now😀

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  12. feifei July 13, 2017 — 6:16 am

    This is really beautiful
    🙂

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  13. Yuvi's Buzz July 19, 2017 — 8:43 pm

    ‘..gives my pulse a stop
    fairy of the delectable night she is..’
    So beautiful!

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      blaNk September 16, 2017 — 10:07 am

      Sorry for a very late reply and thank you so so much😊

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        blaNk September 16, 2017 — 11:36 am

        I have written a new post btw.. check that out too😉

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  14. iyogeshbhatt September 17, 2017 — 5:41 pm

    Short and cute still complete and touching.

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